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We are the damned pt.1

We are the damned

 

 


 She laid there next to him,dead and lifeless."aaww that was tasty,to bad she was beautiful.Its a shame the hot ones taste so ..good."Ville said wiping his mouth."yeah,it was lush."Victoria said smiling and a little bit of her fangs showed."but yet im still earing for more,shall we have another my love?"he ask holding his hand out."of course ,we shall.Should we call Hexina,and Lolind?"she said grabbing his hand."yes,I think there at the club,lets go and get them."they got up and started walking.Victoria put her hood up and.She was a tall woman,with pitch black hair.Her lips were red wine  and her eyes cole black.Her sent was of cinimium.Her skin was pale and cold,but as soft as silk.Her voice was cold and evil.She wore a tight black body suite like how cat woman.She has a thing for cats.Ville had green eyes.His hair was a dark brown.His eyes were dark.He smiled like an angel.He wore a binie all the time and he was pale and soft.His voice was gentle but stern.They walked to the club.People knew that they were evil,they looked evil. so they hid in there homes as they saw them walk buy.They finally got to the club.Ville nocked on the door hard."password."a deep voice said."talisaia."Victoria said softly.It was an old word that no one used it meant "evil among".The man opined the door,he was very large and heavy set.The two walked in,looking around for the other two.They weaved in and out of dancing people.Lights flashing every were."Hexina,Lolind!!"They called out.Finally they spotted Lolind.He wasn't hard to fine.He was a small skinny boy.His hair was silver and shinney.his eyes a light grey blue.Hexina was a strong but thin girl.She had dark red hair and she pale as snow.Her eyes were yellow honey.She was gentle but if you got her mad you better back away.She was always cold so she wares a thin black jacket all the time.


 "we were going to go for a blood kiss,do you want to come?"victoria asked them."yes,im so thirsty."Lolind said in a scratchy sick voice."he didn't eat yesterday."Hexina said shacking her head at him."hey I told you I was bissy,I had a little business with a special lady."he said proudly."well lets go then."Ville said earing them on."ok it wasn't that fun here any ways."Hexina said getting up.They left the club and started looking around for a good kill.Hexina flew up o a high roof top to get a better look.She spotted a group of punk teens.She jumped down at told the rest were to go.Ville hid in a tree,victoria on the roof above the kids,and Hexina and Lolind were blending in with the shadows.victoria jumped down right i the middle of the kids circle."hey baby were did you come from."a kid with a bunch of percings said.Victoria leaned in and whispered in his ear."Im going to give you a kiss...a blood kiss." They didn't know a blood kiss was a bite."ooo cant wait."the punk hissed.Ville jumped out of the tree and smiled.As his fangs showed the boys smile turned into a face of fear.Hexina walked in.Lolind circled around them slowly, staring them in the eyes."are you ready for that kiss?''Victoria hissed.She jumped in and pushed him down.Ville jumped on one of them and Hexina took on two.Lolind took the small one since he was week,he hadn't eaten for awhile.Hexina threw her head back and hammered her fangs in the boys neck.Lolind got up and wiped his mouth."that was good.Young and sweet."  "that was fun,it filled me up too." hexina said after him."did you see his face when Ville smiled.HahahaPricless."Victoria said as she threw the kids lifeless body down."yeah that was a Kodak moment."Ville said smiling."Hey Ville,does Bam know yet?"Lolind ask out of no were."what?Oh no not yet."he said sadly."well isn't he sheepishly,that you don't come out in the day,and you are more dark and you try to hide your mouth?"Hexina said kicking a dead body."I don't know.I just think he will fear me after I tell him."he said frustrated."hhmm.Well we will figure it out sooner or later"Victoria said comforting."Oh did you guys hear,Damine and Hallid are calling a meeting.Tomorrow right after the sun sets."Lolind said breaking silence."no I didn't ,when did they tell?"Ville said narrowing his eyes."um it was posted at the club and at all the other vamp. bars and shit."He said lighting a cigaret."Oh,didn't see them."he said holding his hand out for a cancer stick."lets go,day is almost here."Victoria said putting dark sunglasses on.

 

hope you like it,haha thnxs to every one who helped me a little but!!

love you guys

Vam


Posted on 06/18/2006 9:46 PM Visits: 5
cloude: 06/18/2006 10:18 PM
I LUVED IT VAM!!!! so dark n demented but beautiful and elegant at the same time... awesome!
cloude: 06/18/2006 10:27 PM
just a suggestion... try to describe using all the senses. like what the blood tasted like or smelled of or the texture of the blood. the thump- thump of the teenagers heartbeat. things like that. it really helps with the story.
undertherose666: 06/18/2006 10:30 PM
ph yes thank you for that.I am usualy good with that like i have this poem kinda thing about this stuff and i think its pretty good and all.couse well haha i feel it alot thank you
cloude: 06/18/2006 10:36 PM
yeah np. n remember these are just suggestions... you can do all sorts of things with using the senses but it all depends on what you want to be emphasised n everything. so... yeah.
iminlove: 06/19/2006 6:33 AM
tatly loved it vam its really good
villesgothgirl: 06/19/2006 7:43 AM
oh love it.its so dark
burninginwater: 06/19/2006 9:09 AM
Man. Nice. Very vampyr.
lightslover: 06/19/2006 11:57 AM
I agree with cloude: it was dark and elegant at the same time...I loved it too!!!!
MissCorpse: 06/19/2006 12:04 PM
wow!!
That's pretty good =)
villegurl1: 06/19/2006 10:37 PM
Whoah... that was good Vam!!!
veraheartagram: 06/20/2006 2:23 AM
yes it is good...=) i actually never had the time to read your cross my hearts...=$... and i know you've deleted the first parts, now im sorry i can't read them
vvlover25: 06/20/2006 1:32 PM
AWWWW girl iloved it. Like reading and writeing about Vampires and this one is good
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